Improvements to Panadol Inhaler Pitch
• Headings can be tidied up and letters spaced better
• Colours need to be stronger and brighter
• Add some background colour to the bottom section of the poster
• Add more detail to packaging
• Improve shape and spacing of arrows
• Ticks and crosses need to be more uniform in shape and size
• Writing in bottom section needs to be neater
• Add depth to the background
Control Group
1. Alex
2. Chemar
3. Claire
after having a look at Gerard's Panadol Inhaler pitch and giving him some advice i gave him the all clear to go ahead
ReplyDeleteAlex - controle group
ReplyDeleteThis is a great poster as is, the only thing i can think of that may need improving is the aesthetics such as a brighter heading and just a few tweeks to the text and pictures , everything else looks great and dosen't need a lot of work,
"approved to move to next stage"